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TA’s APRIL FEATURED FAN FICTION – THE WEDDING BY EIRELAV

Posted April 1st, 2009 By: 16 Comments »

Welcome to our first featured fan fiction. It’s a new TA monthly feature – We will be choosing a fan fiction (from our forum) to be the featured fan fiction each month. Congrats to Val’s “The Wedding” for being the winner in April.

Title: The Wedding
Author: Eirelav
Main Characters: Jacob Black, Renesmee Cullen
Rating: PG13

Summary: Jacob Black is getting married. As he’s waiting anxiously for his bride to join him, he remembers some of the key moments of their relationship. Join Jacob as he reminisces about the good times and the bad: when Nessie was first born, how he watched over her as a little girl, what they went through when she matured and suddenly everything changed, falling in love, jealousy, misunderstandings, dealing with the reactions of family and friends, asking the big question, and so much more.

Chapter 1 The First Day of the Rest of My Life

I walked into the huge room and I was immediately amazed, not only by the lovely music, the thousands of flowers and hundreds of candles everywhere, but also by the number of people sitting in row after row of chairs. I looked out into the crowd and saw so many that had influenced my life and help me become the man that I am: my family, my pack, my future in-laws, their extended “family”, and my friends. People from La Push that I had known my entire life, many of whom were wolves, looked a little uncomfortable to be in the same room with so many vampires. It made me laugh to think about what must have been going through some of their minds.

My dad was beaming at me with such a look of pride on his face. I knew that he was so thrilled for me and relieved that I was finally getting exactly what I wanted. My sisters, their husbands and kids were there with him. It was good to have the whole family together again.

The Cullens were there with Charlie Swan and Sue Clearwater. Esme and Carlisle, strangely enough, were almost like parents to me. They taught me so much about life and love, and they treated me like I was part of their family. Such kind and caring creatures, I couldn’t help but love them.

Seth, my Best Man, stood to my left. Quil and Embry were next to him. My brothers looked a little fidgety in their tuxes. They seemed to be uncomfortable in the restrictive clothes and shoes. Quil and Embry also looked a little freaked out to be in such close proximity to so many vampires.

My eyes were drawn down the aisle and I saw Bella. She was absolutely stunning in her floor length gown with her hair pulled up. She glided effortlessly toward me, watching my face the whole way. I smiled at her, the way Bella always made me smile. As she got closer, I could see her mouth the words “I love you.” I winked at her and mouthed “I love you, too.” She gracefully slid into her seat in the front row next to Esme.

The music changed and the bridesmaids started to come up the aisle. Leah was first. It was still amazing to me that the annoying girl who was so irritating had become such a good friend. Alice followed her up the aisle, dancing the whole way. The Maid of Honor, Rosalie, was next. She looked drop-dead gorgeous, as always. Emmett, her husband, let out a low whistle and she beamed at him. I laughed a little bit as I thought of some of my favorite blonde jokes. She smiled sweetly at me and said in a voice so low only a certain few could hear, “Laugh it up, mutt!”

The music changed again and my attention was drawn back down the aisle. I could see my future father-in-law there. He was my enemy for so long, my rival for Bella’s affections. Over the past few years we had become such good friends, and now we were about to be family. Edward was looking toward a door, waiting for her to come out.

Before she came into the room, I could feel her presence. The pull that I had always felt with her was even stronger now than it had ever been. She was my whole world – my reason for living, so much more than the love of my life. I had to remind myself to breathe when I saw her. She was more than beautiful – she was everything. My Renesmee. Time seemed to stand still as the memories came flooding back to me…

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  • Miki

    Woah, pretty good! But, why Jake and Nessie? I am REALLY curious.

    I’m pretty surprised he let the cullens come to the wedding, let alice and rose be the bridesmates, and thinking of Carlisle and Esme as parents he never had. Surprised no one freaked out because they were sooooooo close to vampires. Good job!

  • Momfrog Lorita

    Oh, thank you!!! This was *amazing*!!! I haven’t read the whole thing yet, but the first couple of chapters are wonderful!!! I was laughing and smiling the whole time; I know there are other events that aren’t as nice and sweet and funny, but I’m hooked. I *will* be back for more!!

    Thanks for sharing. :)

  • Marie

    oh its sooooo amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • renae

    OMG!! thats heaps good.
    but Jacob doesnt feel that way for Nessie, he says so in Breaking Dawn.
    he is like an overbearing, protective, loving big brother :D

  • edelacruz

    Nice insight into Jacob and Renesmee’s future…interesting how everyone eventually puts differences aside because they all love Renesmee.

  • Eirelav

    Miki – Thanks! Well, it’s about Jake & Nessie because that’s how the story popped into my head. I’ve always thought Jake was really funny & I love making people laugh, so it seemed like a good idea at the time. The other things are explained as you read more into the story. If you click the above link, it will take you to all 26 chapters that are posted on the forum. Thanks for your comment!

    Momfrog Lorita – Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! Yeah, Jake & Nessie have some difficult times ahead, but also some really good times! Thanks for taking the time to read & comment!

    Marie – Thank you so much! The next chapter should be ready to post soon, so stay tuned!

    Renae – Thank you! Well, when Nessie’s a baby, he doesn’t feel that way about her. That would be really creepy. But this is after she matures and their relationship naturally evolves the way it was meant to. The first 26 chapters are available through the link above. Thank you for your comment!

  • Tia

    Cuuuuteee! I picture Bella and Edward never changing at 18 and 17 with a grown-up daughter who is theoretically 8 yrs old, but because she is a hybrid, her age process is completely adult now. Then I go, “CHARLIE HAS HAD TO FIGURED IT OUT BY NOW!!!!!!” I’m joining the Community so I can read the rest and some of the others. Keep up the goo work TA writers!!!!

    Miki have you read “Breaking Dawn” he imprinted on Renesmee, so he would have to take the bad with the good if he wanted to continue being with her. That includes loving and respecting her family. The end of the book explained that.

    Renae, Jacob may don’t feel that way towards Nessie now, but as she gets older, he’s feelings are more likely to change. Like Quil with Claire. The girls they imprint on maybe children now, so they will fulfill the need to be overprotective brothers. When they go through their puberty stage, they will become their friends and confidants. And when they are finally old enough and mature to be in a relationship, they will become lovers or in Sam and Emily’s case: husband and wife. All that is explained in Eclipse.

  • kijo921

    I loved it…. sat and read it all this morning. Eirelav, you’ve got to continue… you’re doing a fantastic job and giving some of us that ‘fix’ we need for the story to continue! Even if it does seem like sort of a ‘spin-off’, it’s great! THANK YOU!

  • Vanessa

    Stephanie meyer has to continue the story!!
    someone should publish this :D D

  • Alexa

    Wow… just amazing.. you write soo incredibly.. I totally love it.. and i want moree… haha ;) keep writing like that your awesome…

  • Karen

    I have to say, i felt like i was reading stephenie’s work when i read this! it was like reading the next chapters of breaking dawn… and i absolutely LOVE how you used phrases from the actual books in the conversations Jacob and Nessie have. That was pure genius. I sincerely hope you continue to write this story because its everything i’ve wanted to know – basically, how does the cullen/black story continue?! thank you so much – i’ve already given the link to your story to so many of my twihard friends :)

  • kelsea

    Little disappointed that it wasn’t completley finished. It was really great, but I would want the featured fan fiction to be completed….so im not left hanging. lol

  • ruby

    I’m not sure about this, it’s kind of mimicked every vital part of Bella and Edward’s love story. You’ve kind of like re-written the original story, but with different characters. Sorry if I sound really whiney, good luck with your next one =]

  • Courtney

    OH MAN! Haha I loved that!!! That should seriously be a book!!!!! I love how he describes Esme and Carlisle as parents and having the whole Cullen clan there. I also love how Rosalie is the Maid of Honor and Emmett whistling is priceless and so is her reaction lol How his feelings have changed for Renesmee is beautiful like I really freaking like this! haha

  • Jessica

    I cant find any of the chapters after chapter 13. I love reading this. It gives us a insight on what happens when Breaking Dawn ends. I love this!! It is soooo good. So if anyone can help me find where to read the rest of it, please help me out!!
    Thanks so much,
    Jess

  • Vanessa

    I love this story. Your doing a great job and you need to keep writing. You are giving me my much needed TWILIGHT fix. Thanks and your doing awsome,

 

 

 
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